Character description

James Henry Trotter is a gentle boy that wants nothing more than a normal life. He is good fellow who is kind and is always looking for adventures. This does not happen very often because James is a slave of two horrible,boring,cruel aunts. Called aunt spiker and aunt sponge. James is also a welcoming person who is always looking to make friendships with anyone our anything he can. He likes to play with a  eight eyed creature that makes amazing webs on his windowsill. He nurtures her, talks to her and shares all his worries with her. James is a wonderful  boy.

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Wish. you could put a photo in.

Ben Spring